Poetry

[Kev]

This poem was written by myself and my buddy Mike.. We first randomly chose the first letter of each line, and then passed the paper back & forth, each writing every other line.. Enjoy..

“Foibles & Corrections” – by Michael & Kev

Dizzy feelings make me feel confused

Zipper pulled apart, my mind hangs loose.

Tipsy, topsy, turned upside down.

Topsy, turvy, turned all around.

Repeat, rewind, rinse and lather,

…all those feelings fall back together.

Moments to days, and fear of the years

Vigorous movements through tears and fears.

Elevator cables snapped, I’ve plunged without hope.

Help is on the way, there’s always! hope

Gentle grace, and goodness & hope – I found the way,

…I’m falling back together.

Often floating around like a feather wrapped in leather.

Sanity broken, solace forsaken.

Anxiety overrides common sense,

…leaving us in unnecessary suspense.

Newly discovered: This life is mine to make..

Yet I am here, with foibles and corrections?

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